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Achievement Poem

I dont usually write poems, the ones that end up something like them are usually unrhyming.

However, there was a request today. A freind wanted a poem for his little sister..all of 10 yrs, and somehow, the following could be written by me.
Am rather proud of myself :) It may be crude and amateurish, but it serves the purpose for a little girl from her big brother I guess.
My first ever attemp..and that too for someone else's sister!

Here it is for my documentation. Hope shes happy with it
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This Person I know

There’s this little person I know
Who plays the violin better than any piano
Like an Angel is her face
That brightens every moment of my days

Persistent is she to get her own way
Makes me follow her every bidding

But she is sweet
Sweeter than anybody
Strawberries and cream
Pastries and yes, even honey

A little person I may call her
But a big place in my heart do I keep
‘Brother Number One’ she may call me
But no sister like her shall ever be!

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( 8 comments — Leave a comment )
rexzilla
20th Jun, 2006 17:40 (UTC)
Cute poem..
Maybe i'll dedicate it to moopflower.
dippyblogs
21st Jun, 2006 03:52 (UTC)
Re: Cute poem..
Thats about the best compliment I can get :D
Apart from the thank you sms my frnd here got!

Gosh! am I flattered ;)
sashdude
21st Jun, 2006 06:37 (UTC)
cho chweet
that is about the nicest gift, her brother can give.. Way to go dips, should do this regularly now :)
dippyblogs
22nd Jun, 2006 04:39 (UTC)
Re: cho chweet
yeah and maybe open an agency for "Poems to Kids" ;)
i think itll sell well :D
(Anonymous)
21st Jun, 2006 11:55 (UTC)
JM...its good :)
It definitely is the best gift your friend can give.
Errr...maybe you should start writing poems dedicated to your friends now?
dippyblogs
22nd Jun, 2006 04:40 (UTC)
Hey! Listen! I mean.... ;)
go ask ur boyfrnd for a poem, not me!
(Anonymous)
22nd Jun, 2006 12:58 (UTC)
You know that I call YOU JM and not him...
Anyways, boyfriend??
(Anonymous)
29th Jun, 2006 18:40 (UTC)
on neele neele ambar par....
the song has a great guitar thing in the start coz its lifted from a south indian film song, the music director to that original was the legendary Illayaraja.
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